Friday, April 22, 2011

Animal Men

She went to help,
it was a trap.
She ran,
yelped for help
only to be,
once again,
Soiled
by Animal Men.
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2 comments:

  1. sheenMay 14, 2011 at 12:03 PM

    Wow! You said it all so subtly, yet beautifully!

    Wouldn't you say it should be 'yelled for help' though?

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  2. AviMay 14, 2011 at 1:18 PM

    Thanks ! I just thought 'yelp' rhymed with 'help'..but as you said, 'yelled' might be better suited. Let me think !

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