I'll never complain,
whatever be the pain
not sure if I did, earlier
..it won't happen again !
Do what you like to
go walk the talk,
I'm just a maverick who
you're free to mock !
You expect me to share,
just a pretense of care,
'cause if you really did,
one wouldn't really be morbid !
I was breathing when you
were away...
I am...even now,
& hope to, without you!
Isn't it all that matters ?
I'll never complain,
whatever be the pain
not sure if I did, earlier
..it won't happen again !
Can't complain !
ReplyDeleteI like these very much
ReplyDeleteI was breathing when you
were away...
I am...even now,
& hope to, without you
Well that will happen anyway...
how lyrical !!!
ReplyDelete:)
ReplyDeleteI guess I'm completely opposite.
I'll Shout and complain
scream and wail
loud n louder
let all drown in the pain.
But loved reading "I'll Never complain".
And lovely lines,
I'll never complain,
whatever be the pain
not sure if I did, earlier
..it wont happen again !
Well said avishek...
ReplyDeleteThank you all, Trinath, Vignesh, bhaiya, Tulika and Amit, for your comments.
ReplyDelete@ Tuku: Thanks for your antithesis, loved it. :P
@ Avi:
ReplyDeleteHey you seem to catch up the name too.. :D
Antitheses, well, it's me, the violent kind.
I'm scared :O
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